Saturday, March 26, 2022

EXCERPT: Dark Magical Papyrus. An Ancient Egyptian Thriller by Mounia Lakehal Meribout

 


Thebes, Egypt. 2022 B.C. Standing on the balcony at dawn, Neith was looking at the rare white clouds floating in the sky. Sirius, the sacred star, was shining bright on the horizon; it was the first month of the season of the inundation, first decan, the first day. From the big propriety, Neith was able to see the beautiful winding Nile which was expected to flood soon.

 

Neith was a nineteen-year-old housemaid living and working at a Nomarch Menes domain. Devoted and possessing a good temper, everybody at Menes’ house liked to deal with the young Neith. Her position of the lady Nomarch’s first maid required full-time attention and a great sense of anticipation, and Neith was perfectly succeeding at fulfilling her tasks. Work was something important to Neith, and being at the service of Menes’ wife, Satamon, provided her with a lot of it. The young maid was responsible for her meals, her baths, and every single thing the mistress might need.

 

The morning was quiet. Some craftsmen were walking quickly to regain the cliff located in western Thebes, the place that Mentuhotep chose to edify his future mortuary temple.

 

“Work, this is all that matters… Life without work is unbear- able,” she thought.

King Mentuhotep the second was at his thirty-ninth year of reign, as the ruler of Upper Egypt, he succeeded at making the nation prosper and Thebes’ inhabitants were growing in number.

 

The first day of the year had always been a festive day in Egypt. So as usual, a party was supposed to be thrown tonight at Menes’ house. But the night before was New Year’s Eve and it was particularly odd and scary for Neith.

 

“How could I work on the party’s preparations after such a night?” she thought. Indeed, Neith witnessed some strange facts that troubled her extremely.

 

“I need to speak to Ahmes about it… Even though, I can’t imagine him finding a sensible explanation.”

 

Ahmes was a priest’s disciple living in the temple of Montou, and because of his special skills and sharpened intelligence, he was occasionally Menes’ healer. Neith met him a few days after she was assigned to Satamon’s service and since then, from time to time, they would have spiritual conversations and those were very agreeable moments for the young maid. “Mistress Satamon will wake up soon, I must hurry.”

Neith put some order in her long and braided hair.

 

The lady Nomarch wandered a little while in the reception room located on the ground floor then she decided to visit her husband’s workplace, “Of course, I need you to accompany me, Neith.”

 

Menes’s office was located on the left side of the propriety. The two women had to walk a few minutes to reach it, but this wasn’t a great inconvenience, as the walkway and the gardens were absolutely beautiful.

 

When the women arrived at the office, Nomarch Menes was dictating a message destined to the king of Thebes while the young scribe was copying it in a small sheet of papyrus.
“My dear, you work too much lately. You should rest sometime,” Satamon said with a fake tenderness that only Neith noticed.

 

“My beloved, there are political and military matters that cannot be delayed. You know very well that King Mentuhotep needs to be Pharaoh,” Menes replied with a serious tone.

 

“It seems like he’s completely relying on you. Other complica- tions I suppose.”

“Of course there are, fifteen years of complications!” her husband shouted.

 

“Don’t tell me we are losing the war!”

 

“There are still some Nomarchs of Lower Egypt that are not fond of the idea of Thebes being their capital.”

 

“The war is over, that’s what you told me last month, and we even feasted to celebrate the event!” Satamon complained.

 

Menes tried to reassure his wife, “Don’t lose your temper, my dear. It is a matter of time and patience. It is just a delay. Those things take time, but we will succeed soon.”

 

Satamon didn’t reply, her husband’s speech didn’t convince her at all. She kept watching him dictating his missive with certain contempt in the look.

 

Menes was a middle-aged man with an average height and mild obesity. Like most Egyptian notables, he wore heavy makeup and huge wigs.

 

“Definitely not handsome,” Neith thought with a little shame.

Then, feeling that Satamon was determined to stay for a while at her husband’s office, Neith offered her a comfortable stool. Satamon sat down and continued to watch her husband work.

 

At some point, Menes spoke to his wife, “My dearest, haven’t you a banquet to prepare for tonight?”

 

In fact, Menes didn’t want to get his spouse involved in political matters. He was one of those men who think that a woman cannot keep a secret.

“Indeed, my beloved, I have already planned everything,” Satamon reassured him.


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Sunday, February 27, 2022

BOOK REVIEW: Ogaba and the Enchanted Cave by Obande Sunny Jack

 

Ogaba and the enchanted cave

Ogaba and the Enchanted Cave is a quite easy-to-read yet elegant prose targeted for pre-teens and early teenagers. The vocabulary is concise, adequate and fitting for that demographic. Perhaps what is more endearing about the text is its capacity to weave timeless human values into the narrative while placing premium on them. Values such as hardwork, cleanliness, politeness, cheerfulness, wisdom, and the like are rewarded when being practiced especially by children. For example, Ogaba’s cleanliness and wisdom fetches him liberty from the Ojujus.

Worthy of note is the environmental consciousness of the writer who brings to the fore the geography, flora, and fauna typically obtainable in the middle belt of Nigeria such as the great Benue River, the Cattle and nomads, as well as the vegetation of the place. His love for plants, especially flowers comes out more vividly.

The writer himself is not new to the craft of children’s literature. In fact, he could be said to be dexterous in the craft. His first book, Agbenu and the Forest Spirits (initially published in 2005), is currently a recommended text by Universal Basic Education (UBEC) for use in Nigerian secondary schools. His other book, A Miracle for Daddy (2015), was shortlisted for the highly coveted Nigerian NLNG Prize for Children’s Literature. It is then easy to foresee Obande’s Ogaba and Enchanted Cave take up a space among Nigerian children’s literature classics as well as its celebration in the near future. Posterity will surely include Sunny Jack Obande’s name in the Children’s Literature authors’ hall of fame.

Censorship of children’s literature, especially Nigerian children’s literature, is quite imperative in the face encroaching global cultures that could affect moral values upheld nationally. Obande’s Ogaba and the Enchanted Cave doesn’t contain any controversy that could lead to any censorship. This means that the book is safe for both children and adults to read. Researchers in the field of Children’s literature will also find the text as an invaluable material for research. On the whole, it is an unforgettable read.  


 

Sunny Jack Obande


Obande Sunny Jack is the author of Agbenu and the Forest Spirits (Apex, Lagos 2005, new edition by Human Change Communication, 2018. Third edition printed by Advance Publishers, Kaduna 2018, in collaboration with Universal Basic Education (UBEC) for use in secondary schools in Nigeria.

Obande is also the author of A Miracle for Daddy (Accomplish Press, UK, 2015). A Miracle for Daddy was shortlisted for the prestigious Nigerian NLNG Prize for Children’s Literature. He is an alumnus of the NLNG Masterclass in Children’s Literature.

--Reviewer, Bizuum Yadok is the Chairman, Plateau Writers Society (PLAWS) and author of King of the Jungle, and, Echoes of the Plateau.

 

Sunny Jack Obande

 

 

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